First things first: writing content with the inverted pyramid style

Journalists have been using the inverted pyramid writing style for ages. Using it, you put your most important information upfront. Don’t hedge. Don’t bury your key point halfway down the third paragraph. And don’t hold back; tell the complete story in the first paragraph. Even online, this writing style holds up pretty well for some types of articles. It even comes in handy now that web content is increasingly used to answer every type of question a searcher might have. Find out how!

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Key takeaways

  • The inverted pyramid writing style places crucial information at the beginning to engage readers quickly and effectively.
  • Writers should structure articles with core sentences that introduce key concepts to aid comprehension and improve scanning.
  • This style enhances SEO by making content clearer and easier to understand for both human readers and search engines.
  • While effective for many types of articles, the inverted pyramid may not suit creative writing forms like poetry or complex fiction.
  • To implement the inverted pyramid, identify key points, structure your content, and revise for clarity and focus.

What is the inverted pyramid?

Most readers don’t have the time or desire to carefully read an article, so journalists put the critical pieces of a story in the first paragraph to inform and draw in a reader. This paragraph is the meat and potatoes of a story, so to speak. This way, every reader can read the first paragraph, or the lead, and get a complete notion of what the story is about. It gives away the traditional W’s instantly: who, what, when, where, why, and, of course, how.

The introductory paragraph is followed by paragraphs that contain important details. After that, follows general information and whatever background the writers deem supportive of the narrative. This has several advantages:

  • It supports all readers, even those who skim
  • It improves comprehension; everything you need to understand the article is in that first paragraph
  • You need less time to get to the point
  • It gives writers a full paragraph to draw readers in
  • Done well, it encourages readers to scroll and read the rest of the article
  • It gives writers full control over the structure
  • It makes it easier to edit articles

An example

Here’s an example of such an intro. We wrote an article about writing meta descriptions in Yoast SEO that answers exactly that question in an easy-to-understand way. We show what it is and why it’s important immediately, while also triggering people to read the rest of the article. Here’s the intro:

“A strong meta description boosts CTR and signals relevance to search engines. This post shows how to craft descriptions that work, with practical tips and ready-to-use templates. You’ll learn the traits of good meta descriptions, common mistakes, and how Yoast SEO can help you get it right. Using these templates and guidelines can boost CTR, align reader expectations, and improve optimization for both users and Google.”

The inverted pyramid is just one of many techniques for presenting and structuring content. Like us, you can use it to write powerful news articles, press releases, product pages, blog posts, or explanatory articles.

This style of writing, however, is not suited for every piece of content. Maybe you write poetry, or long essays with a complete story arc, or just a piece of complex fiction. Critics are quick to add that the inverted pyramid style cripples their creativity. But, even then, you can learn from the techniques of the inverted pyramid that help you to draw a reader in and figure out a good way to structure a story. And, as we all know, a solid structure is key to getting people and search engines to understand your content. We wrote about that in our article on setting up a clear text structure.

The inverted pyramid

The power of paragraphs

Well-written paragraphs are incredibly powerful. These paragraphs can stand on their own. I always try to write in a modular way. That’s because I’m regularly moving paragraphs around if I think they fit better somewhere else in the article. It makes editing and changing the structure of a story so much easier.

Good writers give every paragraph a stand-out first sentence; these are known as core sentences. These sentences raise one question or concept per paragraph. So, someone who scans the article by reading the first sentence of every paragraph will get the gist of it and can choose to read the rest of the paragraph or not. Of course, the rest of the paragraph is spent answering or supporting that question or concept.

The pyramid, SEO, and AI

Front-loading the main point helps SEO perform in an AI era. Lead with the core result to give readers a fast, clear understanding and to signal relevance to search algorithms. Focusing on that idea makes snippets more likely and improves relevance while making the rest of the piece easier to scan, summarize, and reuse across channels. In practice, the inverted pyramid anchors the article in intent, guiding humans and machines toward the same destination: the core answer.

Answering questions

Something else is going on: a lot of content out there is written specifically to answer questions based on user intent. Today, Google answers a lot of questions and answers right away in the search results. That’s why it makes a lot of sense to structure your questions and answers in such a way that is easy to digest for both readers and search engines. This also supports the inverted pyramid theory. So, if you want to answer a specific question, do that right beneath that question. Don’t obfuscate it. Keep it upfront. You can answer supporting questions or give a more elaborate answer further down the text. If you have data supporting your answer, please present it.

Summaries vs. the pyramid

Front-loading the main point highlights the core idea clearly to both readers and search engines. The inverted pyramid delivers that headline idea first, then adds context and support. A summary condenses the piece into its essential takeaways, handy for meta descriptions, snippets, or quick recaps. Yoast AI Summarize can generate tight summaries from your content, giving you ready-to-use openings and meta descriptions that align with the pyramid and improve SEO performance.

How to write with the inverted pyramid in mind

The inverted pyramid forces you to think about your story: what is it, and which parts are key to understanding everything? Even if you don’t follow the structure to the letter, focusing on the essential parts of your story and deleting the fluff is always a good thing. In his seminal work The Elements of Style, William Strunk famously wrote:

“Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short, or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but that he make every word tell.”

In short, writing works like this:

  • Map it out: What are the most important points you want to make?
  • Filter: Which points are supportive, but not key?
  • Connect: How does everything fit together?
  • Structure: Use sub-headers to build an easy-to-understand structure for your article
  • Write: Start every paragraph with your core sentence and support/prove/disprove/etc in the coming sentences
  • Revise: Are the paragraphs in the correct order? Maybe you should move some around to enhance readability or understanding?
  • Edit: I.e., killing your darlings. Do you edit your own work, or can someone do it for you?
  • Publish: Add the article to WordPress and hit that Publish button

Need more writing tips? Here are 10 tips for writing an awesome and SEO-friendly blog post.

Try the inverted pyramid

Like we said, not every type of content will benefit from the inverted pyramid. But the inverted pyramid has surely made its mark over the past century or more. Even now, as we mostly write content for the web, this type of thinking about a story or article makes us focus on the most important parts, and how we tell about those parts. It forces you to separate facts from fiction and fluff from real nuggets of content gold. So, try it out, and your next article might turn out to be the best yet.

Read more: SEO copywriting: the ultimate guide »

Why you should use synonyms and related keywords

Using the right keywords is essential in SEO. Because using the words your audience searches with will help your posts and pages rank. That’s why we always tell you to try to find the perfect keywords for optimizing your articles. So, after finding the perfect keyword, why shouldn’t you use it repeatedly? Why would you use synonyms and related keywords? It might seem contradictory, but correctly using synonyms and related keywords can improve your rankings.

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It’s important to know the difference between synonyms and related keyphrases. Synonyms are words or phrases that mean the same thing or are very similar. Using them in SEO can help diversify your content and capture different variations of a keyword that people might use in searches. For example, “car” and “automobile” mean the same thing, so they are synonyms.

On the other hand, related keyphrases are terms that aren’t necessarily synonyms but are still connected to the main keyword in context. They help capture broader search intent by covering topics and ideas related to your primary keyword. For instance, if your main keyword is “puppy training,” related keyphrases might include “puppy behavior classes” or “puppy command basics.”

Incorporating synonyms and related keyphrases into your content can make it more relevant. This approach increases your chances of ranking for various search queries.

Variation is key

The main reason to use synonyms and related keywords in your text is to make it much easier to read. If you write a text about ‘candy’ and use the word ‘candy’ in every other sentence, your text will not flow naturally and become unreadable. Your readers will most likely stop reading and leave your page or post. You’ll lose your audience. That’s why you should aim for variation in your writing. For example, ‘sweets’ and ‘delicacy’ could be synonyms for ‘candy’. Related keywords could be ‘chocolate’ and ‘sugar,’ which aren’t synonyms for ‘candy’ but are related to it and can, therefore, still be relevant for your text. We’ll get into that later on in this post.

So, for your text to be attractive and engaging, it should be varied. This can be done in different ways. For instance, you can try to alternate long sentences with shorter ones. Longer sentences are often more difficult to process, and using shorter sentences makes your text easier to read. You can also try to alternate the sequence of words to avoid too much repetition in your sentences.

But the most important thing is to vary with the exact words you use. Especially if you’re trying to rank for a long-tail keyphrase consisting of several words, such as ‘candy store New York’. Using that exact keyphrase in many of your sentences will make your text awful to read. Using synonyms and related keywords, on the other hand, allows you to make a text much more attractive while still being able to focus on your chosen keyphrase.

What about keyword density?

Of course, it’s important to regularly use your focus keyword and be aware of your keyword density. But you shouldn’t overdo it. In the old days, SEOs tended to stuff their texts with their keyword as much as possible. That way, Google would understand the text and rank it accordingly. But Google has come a long way since then. It can read and understand texts perfectly well and is getting smarter daily.

We’ll give you an example. If you type in ‘best candy store New York’ on Google, the results will show pages about ‘candy stores’ and ‘candy shops’. Google understands that ‘store’ and ‘shop’ are synonyms and treats them as such. 

Snippets from the search result page for the search ‘best candy store New York’

This doesn’t take away from the fact that you should still use your focus keyword a few times throughout your post. After all, the focus keyword is still the word or phrase your audience was searching for. These are the words your audience uses and will expect to find in your text. That exact match remains important. But, to avoid using your keyword too many times – also called keyword stuffing – you can use synonyms and related keywords. That way, you can rank on these keywords while keeping your text attractive and readable.

Yoast SEO can help you find related keyphrases based on your focus keyword, saving you time and hassle. All you need to do is click the button to ‘Get related keyphrases’; you’ll find it right underneath your focus keyword in the Yoast sidebar. You’ll see a list of related keywords and search trend data when you click that button.

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This is how the related keyphrases feature looks in Yoast SEO

As a Yoast SEO Premium or Yoast SEO for Shopify users, you can add up to five related keyphrases to your SEO analysis. This lets you optimize your text for these additional terms similarly to your focus keyphrase. As always, you’ll see our familiar feedback bullets to guide you. If you’re a Yoast SEO Free user, you can explore related keyphrases using the tool, but you won’t be able to add these to your SEO analysis.

Yoast SEO can help you balance the use of your keyword, synonyms, and related keywords by recognizing word forms in different languages. If you want to know more, you can read about the related keywords feature in Yoast SEO for WordPress and the related keywords featured in Yoast SEO for Shopify.

The usage of synonyms versus the use of focus keywords is no exact science. The most important criterion is the way readers will experience your text. So, read and re-read it. Is it engaging and easy to read? Or are you getting annoyed by the constant use of a certain term? Be critical of your writing and ask others for feedback on your text. 

As mentioned earlier, you can add your related keywords to the analysis in Yoast SEO Premium and Yoast SEO for Shopify. By adding these, the plugin can check whether you’re using them in your text. Your focus keyword remains the most important keyword, though, and that’s why the plugin is less strict in its analysis of your related keyphrases.

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You can add keyphrases that are related to your focus keyphrase in Yoast SEO Premium and Yoast SEO for Shopify

You’ll also be able to add synonyms of your focus and related keywords when you use our Premium SEO analysis or Yoast SEO for Shopify. These analyses include checks to ensure you’ve used these synonyms in your text and your meta description, introduction, subheadings, or image alt text. Moreover, our keyphrase distribution check will reward you for alternately using your keyphrase and its synonyms throughout your text.

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You can add multiple synonyms for your focus keyphrase in Yoast SEO Premium and Yoast SEO for Shopify

As we said earlier, Google has come a long way since the early days of SEO. It can understand texts, consider related concepts and synonyms, and recognize related entities. All this allows it to serve its users the best results. And part of being the best result is ensuring your texts are easy to read. Google wants to serve readable texts.

So make sure you deliver! Think of synonyms for your keyword or keyphrase and use them to your advantage. Take a moment to come up with a few alternatives for your keyword. But also think of topics that are strongly related to your keyword. You’ll notice that writing a naturally flowing text becomes much easier when you don’t have to use your focus keyword in every other sentence. Using synonyms and related keyphrases helps Google understand the context of your text, which increases your chances of ranking!

Conclusion

Focus keywords remain essential. These are the words your audience is searching for. People searching for ‘candy’ will probably not click on a result with ‘delicacy’ in the text. If you search for ‘candy’, you’ll expect to see the exact word in the search results. So, matching the keywords of your audience remains important.

Using synonyms and related concepts helps you write a text on topic and full of the proper entities. Repeating the same keyword over and over again hurts the readability of your text, especially if you’re optimizing for a long-tail keyword. Furthermore, using synonyms and related keywords may create ranking opportunities you’d otherwise have missed. If you need help with that, Yoast SEO Premium and Yoast SEO for Shopify offer extra features to ensure your content is readable and rankable.

Read more: Does readability rank? On ease of reading and SEO »

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